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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Here is about blog about comments and feedback, I will be talking about what I think about the blog commenting and project feedback assignments.

The comments and feedback that I got from other students from this course, it was really good and helpful. Most of the comments was giving me tips on what I can do to improve on my game and it was something I didn't think about or I forgot about the features they mentioned to me in the comments. Since I was given them tips I kept in mind to use them for the game and wrote it down on where I leave all my notes for all the different modules so I know I would and can go back on it if I every feel like I am forgetting to add something.

The comments and feedback I am giving to other students from this course, I like to think they are helping and doesn't sound too mean. I hope I gave them some tips like the other students did to me for the game project. What I found would be a good feedback strategies is that if we are going to say something negative or they might think it was a negative feedback I would balance it out with a positive comment as well.

At the end of the feedback and comment, we should also mention about the hard work they have done. Show and tell them that we can see that they work hard on their blog post and game project. When I was reading the other student's project blog, it gave me some ideas that I can use for my game, keep in mind with the features and elements they are using for their game and see if they are useful and needed for my game.

Most of them aren't needed for my game but most of them can be useful. I can't remember which blog I read but it was talking about the audio used in their game, I forgot about that feature I said I will use for my game and I saw where and how they picked the audio for the game. When I saw that I wrote it down on my notebook so I can look back it.

I also saw the different writing style from reading other student's blog, I saw how they wrote for their blog and how some interact with their audience so I kept that in mind that I write up my blog.

When reading other student's blog I felt I understand them more when I barely knew anything about them, at times I feel like I was being a stalker and a creep then I realised this is a blog and they wanted to share this to whoever is reading. Even with that thought, I still felt weird when reading their introduction page but reading their project page I can see where they are going with their game and want to see how the game would turn out in the end.

I am okay with how my introduction post but I also felt that I shared too much information of my life outside of college, I'm usually not like that with people I don't know so I felt awkward but it was also who I am. I am usually an awkward person but as you get to know me I am still awkward but more weird than you thought.

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